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To attempt to write a college essay without having read a college essay is similar to attempting to write a mystery without having read a mystery. We have plenty of stellar college essays for students to read; what they quickly discover is that there are a variety of ways to approach the task. Sam Rosensohn, the author of the newspaper column College 101 and founder of College Planning Partnerships, heads all of the college essay work. Sam will help students to write a college essay that only they can write. To do this they must write in their own voice about what they treasure most. When students lament that it's frustrating, they do so with good cause. They have had little formal training and experience in writing honest autobiography. An essay that asks students to candidly reflect on their lives is a far cry from what they're normally asked to do in Language Arts class. Many students have difficulty identify what they want to say and then telling it in a memorable way. We encourage students to be themselves in the essay and we discourage them when they strain to be different. For sometime there has been a growing that has seniors writing highly stylized essays that are short on genuine autobiography. I've watched students labor for hours over what they perceive to be catchy first sentences that convey little information about themselves. This is not to say that a good essay shouldn't dazzle from the opening; it's to say that honest autobiography trumps style every time. According to the University of California at Berkley, a good essay:
College Admissions: How We Decide When We Have So Many Equally Qualified Candidates College 101By Sam RosensohnFor everyone enrolled in College 101, we're going to start class today with a pop quiz - no reason to growl; there's only one question on this assessment. While grades and SAT scores remain the top factors in the college admission process, which of the following tip factors gained more prominence in 2004?
The National Association for College Admission Counseling provided the answer in its newly released book, State of College Admission, which is chockfull of insider information. Oh, the correct answer? It's C. "The essay as a factor in admission has continued to grow in importance over the last 11 years," according to this terrific book that can be found Here. "In fact, the student's essay/writing sample has nearly surpassed a student's rank in class as one of the top four factors in the college admission process," according to the assessment written by David Hawkins, NACAC's Director of Public Policy. That's important information. And the 158 page book is filled with insider stuff that will help you to see how colleges work admissions. "Since more qualified candidates are headed for four-year colleges with each passing year, efforts to add a 'face' to the incoming class may be driving admissions officers toward the essay as a quick way to individualize each application," according to the State of College Admission. Now that it's established that the essay now carries more pop; let's get to how to write it. For starters, gather all of the essays that you will need to submit. I'd suggest you take a look at the link to Common Application to see how many of your picks accept the Common Application. Download the essay questions and start to think about the one you want to answer. The essay questions on the common application work for 277 colleges and universities. If the schools you want to apply to do not accept the Common Application go to those schools' homepages and download their applications. Once you've decided on the essay you want to write first, here's what I suggest you do: Don't start writing. Step back and consider the following: Admission officers are looking to discover who you are and if you would be a good fit at their schools. An essay that offers insight into what is essential to you will generally do the job. Readers are looking to discover students who care deeply about something and who've committed themselves to that endeavor. A strong college essay provides evidence of a student's most important achievement, what he cares about most in the world, and why college is important to him. Now look at the initial essay you chose and see if it will allow you to present what you've devoted yourself to and care deeply about. Does the question let you present a prominent portion of your history in an interesting manner? At the moment there is a growing trend that has seniors writing highly stylized essays that are short on genuine autobiography. I've watched students labor for hours over what they perceive to be catchy first sentences that convey little information about themselves. This is not to say that a good essay shouldn't dazzle from the opening; it's to say that honest autobiography trumps style every time. |